Without a stocked graveyard your spells are full-price and your synergies are largely offline
While there are interesting cards in this deck and also interesting mechanics, none of these cards and mechanics work together well, and in some ways they even work against each other
Whenever it attacks, it also creates a token thats a copy of the target token the player controls
Pure control is actually well-positioned
Its very much a control deck looking to answer opposing threats while bleeding away at opponents with the commander, Y'shtola, Night's Blessed
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